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Brooke's avatar

These poems are so perfect for the season. They make me think of sitting around a crackling fire ♥️ I also love your daughter’s illustration!

Susannah Violette's avatar

Thank you!!! ❤️

Meg Morrison's avatar

What beautiful pieces - each compliments each other.

Re: “A photo I took of a pine trunk fire in my garden”

Wow … there’s a face immediately there.

I’m looking up its nostrils, the eyes behind, the mouth - as if.caught mid-sentence; speaking drunk maybe? Or mid oration in a scene from an unnamed Play. It’s an exquisite, arresting image.

Susannah Violette's avatar

Yes I see it!! And thank you!

Regan Roberts's avatar

The photo of the fire in your garden is captivating. Obviously, the poetry is too! I really enjoyed the second one.

Susannah Violette's avatar

So glad you enjoyed it!! The fire inspired the poem! It was one of those trunk fire thingys where the inside is hollowed a little and that’s where you light it and it burns slowly through.

Regan Roberts's avatar

I didn't know you could do that! <looks at the stumps in the garden...>

Susannah Violette's avatar

Research Swedish fire log!

Ian Winter's avatar

I like “the drift of your hip”, in such a snowy context. 🙂

Susannah Violette's avatar

thanks! that’s a really old poem now - it almost feels cheeky posting it!! I wrote it about 20 years ago then adapted it a bit for publication a few years ago.